Oh my goodness! I can't believed I missed this - somehow but I'm glad I've read it now. This is amazing, Purvi, you've got talent. It's beautiful and touching and just like you described in your poem, very serene and sweet.
3 years ago
by Beautiful Soul
A couple of things here, One: In the first line, I don't think you need the word "do" it cuts off the flow for me. Second: In the fourth stanza, I don't think you need (hope). It would make more sense to me if you took it out. Otherwise I do like this poem a lot as well. I like how you have 2012 as the title because it goes with the poem in a way that you remember everything that happened and the memories you have are good and bad. It gives the reader a perspective that they can imagine happening and want to be in. great write. 5/5