Comments : Patriot.

  • 9 years ago

    by Britt

    This poem honestly gave me chills. So beautiful, MA. I adore your heart.

  • 8 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    The passion in this poem is outstanding! It speaks volumes about the authors beliefs, and hopes, and how they wish they could make the world a better place. It also remains focused on writing, and the passion behind it all, the reasons for doing so. The poem has a very smooth pace to it and write an uplifting and also inspiring tone about it. The author also cleverly personifies this world, and mother nature, and the longing for peace is so captivating, it really enriches that desperation to make people live a better life, and to want more for their own life! A truly touching poem, written with the passion which is missing from many poems.