A beautifully documented struggle. Sometimes, pain can produce wonderful art, such as this; take pride in your recovery, for you are eternally stronger than that which tried to bring you down.

Thank you for sharing.
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IdTakeABulletForYou

Powerful beyond words! The parts in the brackets especially moved me, it's like that inner monologue coming to life, knowing this has harmed you and your friend and you are worth more than its hold on you.

A very emotional, heartfelt write <3

This is very full of force and yet full of fragility and weakness.
Your opening line was smart and beautiful, I was guessing how sad or how creative or how simple this poem will turn out to be.

I love the parts you highlighted and they were mutually unique as the rest of the poem.

Most of your poems are heartfelt and do reflect your personality and the kind of person you are, and I do like how I can see you in your poems and do believe every word. It makes the poem closer to the reader and makes them crave for more.

The fact that you used your own struggle to come up with something beautiful and come up with this poem and all its beautiful word choice is very brave, and although in different circumstances but I can relate to your bravery in writing about something so painful and so personal for the public readers.

You've done a very beautiful job, very raw and honest and I just love the power in your closing verses and lines and the belief you do have in yourself and in your friend.

Well done :)