Comments : Hope

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Kate

    I suppose dreams and fantasies about love really can completely overwhelm our lives sometimes and it seems as if nothing else will suffice but for those dreams to come true.
    However, sometimes it's important to remember the real, everyday side of living or we may lose ourselves completely.

    By the way, I think the second line should read "Thoughts of feelings TOO real to hide" (double 'o')

    Great write,

    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by Kate Hicks

      Thanks Ben, my spelling is awful.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Kate, I like this I really do.
    Sometimes it's hard to wake up from our dreams and be hit with a harsh reality.

    Em

    • 1 year ago

      by Kate Hicks

      Thank you, yes it's hard but we try to find a way.