Distrustful Guide

by uttAm   Feb 9, 2015


I followed your glittery smile
to the mysterious of paths,
like a wanderer;
hoping you will show me a way
out of this gloomy place.
You hummed tunes of ecstasy and love,
and I like an explorer trusted you
as my good guide; looking myself leading to the radiant path.
But slowly you disappeared from my sight,
leaving me broken and disturbed.
Not knowing whether you will hear
me anymore now,
I yelled for you
standing still, here in the more confusing
paths you have led me to.
Your unexpected farewell
was like an end
of any sweet dream to me.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    You are your best and most trust worthy guide. For there are some who will leave you half way taking away with them the trust that you built...another touching write. Hope you are okay...take care.

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Haha....i can't stop reading this poem...i don't know I just love this so much....
    Well I found a typo

     "good guide; lookind myself leading "
    ^ its looking...

    And oh lol...this poem is going in my favourites too...
    You know just keep writing more and more...your poems are extremely beautiful and wonderful...and it might help you too...writing helps many :)

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh this is so beautiful....i love this so much...true incident or something????
    Well...now that the guide has disappeared...you will now learn how to help yourself.. Do not wait for others, learn how to help yourself, right... ;)
    And now the wanderer has to become the guide...he had to now become some one elses light..someone else's smile.... :)
    Haha....i better stop here or else you know right, I won't stop with my words :p

    Wonderful poem...i'm always so glad to see a new poem by you...its like I go...finally, lastly..kuch toh likha...

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