That was awesome. The comparisons you used were very unique and really painted a picture. You kept it going story wise very well and kept it vague enough to be very open. It inspires the idea of really saying goodbye to poetry as an entity, almost as a friend but very well be the writers swan song. 10/10.
2 years ago
And I can still read this every day and find yet a note her meaning in it, but you wrote it when you were drunk or broken, didn't you love? That's how all the best poems are written, and the only reason I haven't commented until now is because this one is something I'm just too afraid to read too much into.