Trapped inside
by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX Feb 11, 2015
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I just feel like hiding finding a secret little place just think just to clear my head just to feel that little taste of freedom again where life make sense and everything was so simple. Not to be trapped in a body that doesn't feel like mine all I want to do is feel the Sun on my face in the breeze in my hair no matter what I do I feel like I'm never going to be me again...... |
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8 years agoby Em
Good piece... I feel a grasp of hope with the 'search for freedom'
Only quarms I have are 'place just think to clear my head' I think you missed a to out 'place just to think to clear my head'
'where life make sense' I think you need a 's' on the 'makes' -
8 years ago
by Mr. Darcy
Hello,
I like the format here. A piece of prose that enables freedom. Ironic really as this is what is being searched for within this piece.
Again, its good to write, to get it out.
Take care,
Michael
