This is a very well written poem that touches me deeply

Possibly my favourite write from you even though it is heartbreakingly sad Nananom....I mean really.....its flawless O.o

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When the sun will find no East
to rise from

^^ oi-vey

This is amazing wording here, the saddest and cuts straight to my heart.

It's so hard to find words to comment on this piece Nana. I can't touch on the subject , nor can I in any way analyze or Critique this...it was poured Out in a way that seems to be effortless.

Love your writing, xoxo.

This is a thoroughly moving and excellently written piece of poetry. Hats off to you!
All the very best,
Ben

Wonderful writing. Arabian dream indeed. My friend talks much about it.