Comments : Like a Candle on the Table

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh wonderful....
    Reminded me of....i love the way you lie by Rihanna :p

    It was beautiful...but yes April..remember :p
    I'll nominate this too on Monday

  • 9 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Y o u . a r e . a . c l e v e r . p o e t !

    • 9 years ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Purvi and Mr. Larry. I actully don't think I'm clever... I just write.

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh it did get nominated although being in the love section....

    Hmmm....i say don't change it...it grit nominated, do you think it will be able to get voted on too by the judges??? Is there a glitch there???

    I guess my hand is just lucky that repairs and corrects everything it touches..:p the golden hand.... Haha or my luck good luck is at its peak and oh lol...that means my exams are gonna go superb..wow..i'm already happy...
    Oh dear God!

    Congratulations...lol...

  • 9 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Your title reminded me of the song "Like a candle in the wind" and whats even more smarter in this write is the way you have done the acrostics! Brilliantly penned and I like the imagery it holds.