Broken heart ^^

by Bayan   Feb 18, 2015


One day a man will come to see,
What's in my heart and try to feel
My broken heart has died in me,
And there inside I guarantee,
No heart around found what you'll see,
A brother's love kept it alive
For many years except a night
one night the hope did die again.
A broken heart that's what you'll earn!

24.5.2012

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  • 9 years ago

    by Bayan

    Thank You so much^^ :)

  • 9 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Line 5; "..AROUND found what you'll see".
    Just a clue I believe could fit into your rhythmic flow.

    A wonderful script, after all.
    All that happens, tend towards win. Against all odds, victory abounds.