Letting Go

by Ren   Mar 10, 2015


Once the glue,
Of a broken family,
From which I lost my ability,
To hold on.
Pieces fell...
One by one...
Shattering.
Irreplaceable.
I am left alone.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Ren,

    I thought I'd come back to one of your newer pieces as you keep insisting that the stuff you wrote when you were young wasn't all that good! - you are wrong, by the way.
    This really is a sad and emotional little piece from you here; so short, but highly effective.
    "Shattering. Irreplaceable. I am left alone" - heart-breaking.

    Take care, Ren,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Hey Ben,

      You're very kind.
      Thank you so much for the comment and encouragement :)
      It is greatly appreciated!

      Take care!

  • 9 years ago

    by redxiii

    You'll always be my rock. As long as I'm breathing you'll never be alone. All you have to do is reach for my hand, and I'll be there to pull you close.

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