Static Stars

by Sunshine & Maple Tree   Mar 24, 2015


Her eyes were starry, black night shade,
I became her nightly moon guide.
we traveled under a sun divided
by meadows of unnamed flowers.

Orphaned souls left abandoned,
entwined with kisses of light
exhaled upon the shoulders,
we wander the world in a static embrace.

Violets adorn a path of distance
for footsteps to linger, sharing
a universal embrace, canvassing
inspirational -
cyclone whispers.

Breaking the silence of the shades
with words only the wounded
might comprehend-
in a radiant world of ours,
we survive the night.

by: Rannia Moallem & Andrea Pike

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A superb poem, seamlessly put together which is always difficult collaborating.

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... this is one of the best poem collabs I have ever read! I looove the imagery you both created.

    From the first stanza, there was something so refreshing about what you were describing.

    "Orphaned souls left abandoned,
    entwined with kisses of light
    exhaled upon the shoulders,
    we wander the world in a static embrace"

    ^^ I think this is my favorite stanza (if I can even choose a favorite). I love how you depict how strong this bond is - and this line is beautiful: "we wander the world in a static embrace"

    "Breaking the silence of the shades
    with words only the wounded
    might comprehend-
    in a radiant world of ours,
    we survive the night."

    ^^ Okay the last stanza is also my favorite. I looooove the ending - like Poet on the Piano mentioned, there's a beauty in seeing the light and staying strong and positive no matter what is happening in your life.

    This poem was penned beautifully. Well done you two! <3333

  • 9 years ago

    by Giegielove Goddess Poet

    Very nice! 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, I love the imagery here, it's amazing! (will leave a better comment after I've gotten some sleep)

  • 9 years ago

    by WW

    Fantastic piece. When I reread it, I took it slow to savor it.

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