Two Strangers in a Hospital

I really like the way, that you see a story in every person :) and then, actually reflect upon it.. it's wonderful :)

Weekly contest April 13th
Judging comment:

This adorable writing represents a face of human nature that we see and feel, still very hard to capture its essence. the title is very tricky leaving the reader unable to imagine what kind of dialogue or story the poem might tell, her opening as well, only one line and it was pretty enough for a very detailed enjoyable discription.
In the third stanza I liked how she referred to her writing as a secret, it's what we unintentionally do, transforming situations of our daily lives into poetry, and in most of the cases secretly, where the main characters would never know how inspiring they were.
Her closure was very successful conjoining the purpose of each, framing in specific terms how both characters were very familiar despite being strangers.
Neat layout and excellent word choice.

Judging Comment:

This was a very nice poem since it was like meeting a person that shares your passion yet they are hidden of it because of their profession, but you still notice certain characteristics that they both share. I was deeply in love how this poet involved her personal life and made this poem spectacular because it holds that magic that life just seems to have. It was filled with love, and a kind of understanding, yet it held something platonic that affects us in every day which is life and love.

- Moria Bella Bair -

I can't believe I just now saw this piece and read it thoroughly enough to actually read it and get it. (Sorry). Congrats on the win, most definitely well deserved. I'm so sorry I missed this though, it is absolutely wonderful. The hints of both stories the narrator's and the blonde they are observing are beautifully done in a way that is detailed enough to captivate both while still leaving their secrets intact for only them. I love the feel here, your pieces are always so unique, but this one is one of my favorites thus far. I wish I could describe why, but all I can think to say is - it's phenomenally different. It is simply captivating.

Excellent write :)

Nice poem