Teddy Bear

Very sad but extremely moving tribute.
All you can do is make their last moments special and to make them feel loved. I feel sure that the Teddy brought much more comfort than you could ever imagine. I took a bunch of balloons to my stepfather to cheer him up before he died, trying desperately not to make him feel like he was dying so I understand your pain.

This has really touched me, what a wonderful piece full of emotion. Death is one of the things that is set in stone but it hurts like hell well someone close to us dies.

Take care, Em

How very sad NightFlyer your poem is, and my Heart goes out to you.
You have served your friend well with this great poem written in her memory.

If it's any consolation, Death is never the end of our lives, and we will be reunited when our turn comes.

Your poem is a great tribute to her and well penned. It is very beautiful and touching.

Judging Comment

You can't have a dry eye after reading this piece. Its an emotional and touching rhyme poem that fills the heart with love and the true sorrow of death.

Compassion comes to mind and heart with this poem. Its a very personal and heartfelt poem by this author and its an elegant poem of his heart.

Judging Comment:

This was a sad yet wonderful tribute to someone so special to the poet. Makes people want to tear up here and there since a death is never easy to experience, I for one have gone through the pain and this poem hit close to home. Really relatable to people who have gone through, and are going through this point in their lives.

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