Wow! Beautiful, Ms. Meena, beautiful! (: Good job with the form! Memories can really tear your heart out knowing that those moments cannot happen again. |
by GB
You chose a sentimental topic that fits this adorable form very much. Beautiful diction and nice flow. Very enjoyable, Meena. |
by Everlasting
Well done. I like the last line. "With the memories left by you" |
by Baby Rainbow
Loving this form, might have to try it one day I get time to write. This write is not only creative, and done well given the rules, it is flawless and very moving. You have picked a topic that readers will be automatically in tune with and able to relate to well. |
by Timothy
Nice work. You are a true poet. |
It's usual the way we feel sad in love when stuffs doesn't go according to our will. But here, the words, feelings, grief and expressions are totally different and highly. That's the best part of this poem. This kind of writing can really wins hearts. |
by Ben Pickard
Meena |