I haven't read such simple and beautiful writing about nature in a while.
2 years ago
I have to admit that I came across your poem after seeing Maple Tree's comment....and she said it perfectly, this IS beautiful, your rhymes flow like glass and don't feel forced at all......a completly natural nature piece :)
So much beauty, in the simplicity of your wording, and the rhyme just added to it. I couldn't help but find myself wrapped up in the flow of this piece, like I was in a twister myself. Great work and congrats on the win!
Excellent word choice and structure, rhyming as smooth as the glass. Somehow the short stanza and non-complicated Imagery fit this category of poems very much. The author knew how to use the title very well coming up with more than beautiful poem.