Demolished

by Baby Rainbow   May 16, 2015


I signed over to you
possession of my soul
as soon as I first felt
your body on top of mine.

Saffie
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  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    When two people become close and of course nothing is guaranteed, the outcome can be heartbreaking. We feel like we have given all of ourselves and the other person walks away with it. Time heals all wounds and all we can do is learn from it. This poem indeed is very personal and thank you for sharing.

  • 2 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This seems to be a really personal poem so I wont leave a big comment, but I will say that you wrote this very well. When we feel our lowest after pain happens, it feels like we are giving our soul to that person to keep. It is difficult to break away from a lot of times. I love the title as well I think it fits perfectly with the poem xx. stay strong :)