Comments : Breathe - Senryu

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Lovely, creative little piece. I love these.

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love this. It's kinda like the peace of writing, how comforting it is and how therapeutic it has become to so many people. Or maybe that's just what I got out of it because that's how I feel or want to feel right now. Anyway, that's not the point, what is though, is the fact you've penned a wonderful senyru with such glorious simplicity. You managed to make this really jump out at me, I am adding it to my favorites, great job.