Comments : A Poem I Can't Name

  • 2 years ago

    by Poetess

    This seems personal. Though I haven't really tried to figure out much the meaning behind it all, I did enjoy reading it. There's something about it.. thank you for sharing

  • 2 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    My heart wishes release from this confine.

    Apply this line in life, release all pain...........
    release ur soul & heart from aches.

    nice chosen words like
    I've poured my pain time and time again.
    like fire reflected eyes in a war.

  • 2 years ago

    by Everlasting

    It sounds sad. It sounds devoid of life. hollow. I'm not sure the exact word to say about the atmosphere this poem has. Though, it reminded me of the times when I have felt hmm null?,

    I like the title, it's hard to give a title and name the poem. Though to name a poem and give it a title, I think both are different things or may be are the same?

    ha! I have no clue.

    But if you keep pouring your pain with a hushed voice, it may help... but sometimes, what helps most is to talk about it with someone who could give you feedback.

    I like the poem. It help one ponder about how one feels. Thanks for sharing.

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    There is sadness that is not named yet it lives inside of you, a sadness which will grab a reader and make them ponder why, what. The message within this is meant for you and to the person whom you have written this for which makes it personl...touching