Comments : What the memory captured.

  • 2 years ago

    by The Fairy Mary Poppins

    Ah this sounds so peaceful but the bottom line in all this is that it's true and relateable (sorry for the spelling) since it's true what we see where we live isn't how the other person across the world will ever see so it's rare and beautiful :)

  • 2 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    Full of beautiful imagery that makes me feel as if I am looking out of that window myself on the first day of a trip to somewhere brand new. I love this :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is an execellent put together poem!

    You have captured so well how to take a simple image, and turn it into a poem. I also like how it litererally was an image (by a photographer) that was captured.

    I think your wording was really great, descriptive but yet not overpowering, your adjectives used were very precise and fitting and I love the choice of "soothe the soul" that sounded just as relaxing and beautiful as it was intended to imply.

    I also like the truth in this poem about memories and how they are captured someone's through photographs but that moment will never be captured again, I think this is a very poignant point of life and what makes time and memories so precious and priceless.

    I loved this!

    Well done

  • 2 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I agree with everyone here, I love the picture you painted here. :). It seems that nature to you is something so beautiful and welcoming.

    I love how you uniquely put the camera as your eyes, I would have never thought of our eyes like that. It is crazy to think about but it works well, because there is so much truth inside that. The imagery you paint here does give the reader something to see and they see it through your eyes and their own eyes 5/5

  • 2 years ago

    by Maritza Quintero

    I am a photographer and I loved how you captured the emotion and thoughts that go through my head,when I am about to snap a photo of nature.

  • 1 year ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I really like this!! great choice of word and I really like the flow :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    What is captured in the memory never fades and that beauty seems to last and comes on whenever we admire nature's effortless beauty. Nice work!