Comments : One day in heaven

  • 2 years ago

    by Teria

    Great read! I feel verses may create a better flow but your wording is spot on! Great emotion :D

  • 2 years ago

    by Victoria

    This is the one that put tears down my face. Beautiful poem.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    This brought a tear to my eye. Such sadness and beauty x

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Double post

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Beautiful work!
    Nice emotion.

  • 1 year ago

    by Belle

    Beautiful feeling and emotion in this poem.

  • 4 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Like everyone said it brought tear to my eyes too.
    The emotions of Losing a child is something cannot be described. It can only be felt.