So I'm here to tell you, that suicide isn't a game,
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The strongest line in this entire poem, for a lot of people don't know the effect it has on people and many because of that people take it as a joke.

The imagery and narration was quite nice to read and good job.

Read it through.. I like it and I'm happy about the campaign. Can't wait to watch the video.
Great work you doing.

Robbie, can I join you campaign to end pain and depression?

Love, love, love this piece. It's all about optimism. I always say suicide is an easy way out, it's not doing it that's the hardest part.

All the best, Em