Comments : Plea

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    This is another beautiful write from you. There is a certain style to your poems that set them apart, an old style about them that sadly, seems to have all put died in this modern world :) I really like that you are not making a plea for your own benefit rather for the benefit of another...

    I've missed reading your work...thankfully you were signed in at the same time as me today :)...definitely nominated!!!

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Hellon. It's something that is happening right now, that's probably why.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Beautifully written with an effortless flow.

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    You have such a charming way of writing that just makes me come back again and again....it's very olde worlde and just something I feel enchanted by. Haven't read your work for a while (sorry) but..glad to have found this one!

    BTW...

    They could call me from the furthest plane

    Should it be plain?

    I know you're probably thinking of getting on the next plane to revisit but....:)

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you Hellon, it's always a pleasure to know you like my work :)

      You're right, it is plain! Just fixed it. Thanks :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Such charm and passion in your writing with a effortless flow

    • 8 years ago

      by Maher

      Thank you, but that praise is too high for me :)