A Torn Heart's Truth

by cassie hughes   Jul 28, 2015


Trust me,
The time for tears
has flown.
Look into your soul
and dare the truth
to walk free,
escaping the torn
and tattered
remnant of your heart.

In response to Saffies prompts -

Trust
Tears
Time
True/Truth
Torn

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  • 8 years ago

    by Spontaneity

    I think that all of the prompts fit nicely together in this little poem. Usually, in little poems such as these, not all of the prompts fit together. However, I think this fit excellently.

    Congrats on winning the challenge.

    Great piece.

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Saw this on the club thread and loved it there - a clever weaving of lots of different prompts

  • 8 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Hey, this is actually really good. I only say that 'cause I'm not used to short pieces being so wonderful, especially when you're trying to include so many little things (prompts). I think you achieved a seamless flow and a wonderful grip on the reader, leaving them thinking.

    Great piece. Very well done.

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