Comments : Reality

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Wow, this is a genuinely moving and sad piece, Jenni. The end is very powerful - well written.

  • 2 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    The feels of this poem is real, It is sad when no one can completely understand what another is going through. I love how you always seem to write your feelings out and let the reader see what you are feeling inside. This one hits home to me as well. powerful write to keep the reader interested from beginning to end. NOMINATED!!!! 5.5

  • 2 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    The feels of this poem is real, It is sad when no one can completely understand what another is going through. I love how you always seem to write your feelings out and let the reader see what you are feeling inside. This one hits home to me as well. powerful write to keep the reader interested from beginning to end. NOMINATED!!!! 5.5