What a lovely write. Well done.

Great little write. An uplifting read filled with happiness and optimism. If this was for Adreamer's challenge I think it would have been difficult to beat. :)

This is cute and uplifting in its own simple kinda way, but I think you did a great job writing this one. The style is kinda odd but it works well for this piece, nice!

Smile,
carefree,
Live for the moments,
Friends and family,
dance ,
positive mind,
happiness.

Plain but with twisted colorful words

I love it.

I like the optimism in this piece.

I found this poem less like a poem but more like a motto or a quote that just didn't fit in the quote part of the site, since many poets have done this before, I know I have.

Besides that little tibit that will be/won't be true I found this beautiful in it's simple way of saying don't let anything get you down because you have others that are there to help you along the way.`

Really like this one:)

Great tempo and flow etc to it but....

"Smile and be carefree in all that you do
Live for the moment and it will live for you"

^^^^ one of my favourite opening lines of any piece :)) Awesome!

There are so many things to like about this poem. First of all the flow is poetic and majestic. The message of the poem will warm a lot of hearts because happiness is there in our hands but we just have to find it. The rhyming is beautiful here as well.