Comments : Friends to lovers

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great flow and rhyme to this piece. well done.

    • 8 years ago

      by Matthew Alexander

      Thank you :) I had some good inspiration for it so the words came easy.

    • 8 years ago

      by Matthew Alexander

      Thank you :) I had some good inspiration for it so the words came easy.

  • 8 years ago

    by Darren

    Love the slow down at the end.

    Good rhyming poem, they seem to be making a comeback.

    I actually moaned at my wife the other day for finishing my sentences.
    She replied
    'what do you expect we have been together 18 years'

    great write

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Lovely little poem..
    Only thing I can think of is you should have wrote 'Your laugh is like a song to me' instead of 'you laugh is like a song to me' :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Woah.
    This is miraculous.
    Holy crap. I love this!!!