Most Elaborate Way to Ask a Girl on a Date

by Poetic Ninja aka Papachopchop   Aug 18, 2015


Bonjour Mon Ami,
Greeted my friend gracefully,
He spoke genuinely,
About his affection for me,
I didn't know what to believe,
Because my heart, it still grieves,
He said all the right things,
Along with this friendship he brings,
But is the grass really this green?
Or are there hidden strings?
I invited him over,
He acted so noble,
I found that my curiosities,
Finally got the best of me,
So I decided to be blunt,
And ask him what he wants,
Looking me in my eyes,
I was a little surprised,
But this was the reply,
That he gave back to me.

Amy, I know your heart, it still bleeds,
You feel defensive inside and it tells you to flee,
But lend me your ears and please take heed,
For I respect you for the person you are to me.
I'm not looking for a hookup, it's more that I seek,
It is told in fairy tales but it is real if you believe,
That two people can care for each other genuinely,
Always communicate with open honesty,
To be accepted however flawed they may be,
This is what I've searched for so desperately,
Because I know that it is out there,
Wherever it may be,
One day I will find that beautiful lady,
That brings vibrant color to my world and isn't shady,
Whenever she is near my heart starts to race,
I know all of this is a bit too much to take,
Because this isn't the time or the place,
All things in due time to those that can wait....

With that he grasped my hands,
Looked me right in the face,
Told me if I am willing,
Would I come to his place,
On Friday, August 21,
Stay the night and watch a movie,
No expectations, just fun.
If we hit it off then so be it,
I say come what may,
If we don't we're still friends,
Now what do you say?
Cause you write the end.

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  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    That two people can care for each other genuinely,
    Always communicate with open honesty,
    To be accepted however flawed they may be,
    This is what I've searched for so desperately,
    Because I know that it is out there,
    Wherever it may be,

    ^^This one I agree with wholly for its important to have an open communication, be honest and truthful-the very foundation of a lasting relationship.

    It takes a long time to know a person and when you are in a relationship and are comfortable one feels better to open up a bit more. One thing though don't just say and do things just to get the girl but be genuine and if she is the one go for it and let her know.

    I like how you have written this poem from both view points and it talks about how one is trying to get over a hurt relationship while the other is open and waiting to help..nice write.

    • Thank you for the praise. Yes, I did my best to take what information I knew about her and write some of it from her point of view. I'm glad it was appreciated.