Free my soul.

by Jamparnell   Sep 9, 2015


So many times upon a time,
I trap my soul in lines of rhyme.
The energy,
I think you'll find...
Will remind you of eternity.
We are all just entities
Individual sentient beings.
Sensation,
Perception,
Mental formation,
Inception of conscious thoughts.
I am not
me.
I was who I used to be.
Let me be free.
One with the key,
Is you, it's not me.

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  • 8 years ago

    by WW

    Love the huge topic this piece moves in to tackle. I struggle with this kind of stuff personally, and when I come across something that demonstrates coherency on this subject I'm always impressed.

    Terrific flow and subject matter.

  • 8 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Beautiful poem

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    An excellent write that flows quickly and fluently. Really well penned.
    All the best,
    Ben

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