Climax

by Alexis   Sep 14, 2015


She opened the door,
slicing the morning
in small wet pieces.

Her wintered heart
intervaled the rainy day
with an anonymous smile
& for some seconds
his silence gave way
to the sun.

alexis
2015

2


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 1 year ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Freaking awesome poem. The 1st three lines are breath taking

    the last three lines are mind blowing. I just love love this piece. I wish I can put it in a frame and read it every day.

    Awesome wording. The climax...in these few seconds..

    this is going to be my favorite poem for a long time now.
    Thank you for writing it.

  • 2 years ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    this is superb, a nugget of brilliance. A moment captured and polished into a real gem.

    Nominated.

    Take care,

    Michael