Comments : Bathymetry
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7 years agoby Em
This is magical. A breath of fresh air.
I love how you portray running wild probably free of thoughts, people and even with plenty time like in a dream then like a delicate piece of glass you come back to reality with a bang.. So many can relate to wanting to be free of darkness but it only happening in our dreams.
Great imagery.
Great write. Em-
7 years ago
Ha, thank you. Yeah, a rare poem from my own heart. Most of them I just start writing and let it happen, like knitting, but I actually had something in mind for a change. I guess my poetry over the last year or so has been a catalogue of the ups and downs of my mental illness so, it figures.
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