Hello Koan,

This centred piece looks terrific...
Like a heart perhaps. It would certainly suit the theme of love. Sharing love in its emtional and physical sence. You have used beautiful words to depict a light joyous feeling one experiences with the purity of love.

Excellent.

Michael

Ugh...i love love poetry.....this is oustanding! Your format here is wonderful and really looks great, but the content is exceptional. Great writing please god dont stop!

Koan,
I can say in all sincerity, you are one of the most gifted new writers on this site - this is beautiful and pure poetry. Well done and all the best,
Ben

*Sorry, double posted!