Comments : Arrector Pili

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Chelsey
    Brilliant and enlightening title and wonderful poem, again so full of wonderful description it really is remarkable. I love the play of "fall" in this piece and ".....refusing to compose anything that would give you credit for stolen emotions...." - brilliant line.
    Another great poem and all the best,
    Ben

  • 2 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, I had no idea, thanks for the lesson as well as a lovely poem.

    I think my favourite stanza is battling with yourself not to write about someone who caused you pain, because you want to show that they are not worth your tears, your time or your pain, but sometimes that is hard to hide.

    You have created a great flow to the poem, and the tone is steady throughout.

    Also loved the metaphors of the book and blanket, you are not something to be picked up and used whenever they feel like it.

    Great work, nice to read from you again

  • 2 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    "Yet I'm back in fall, just like last year, and
    its cold again. You're gone again. And these
    goosebumps miss your body heat."

    ...when you finally live somewhere in the world
    with this weather, the poem makes me ache more.

    its really really cold chels, lets cuddle :(

    • 2 years ago

      by Chelsey

      Down for the cuddle.... Hold me first, then I'll hold you.
      Fleece blankets and chick flicks. and I prefer to fall asleep in your hair lol