I think the person who down voted your poem probably did so because they thought the link was an eyesore. Honestly, it is a bit of one, but the words and the article go so well together... it's quite honestly beautiful. This was supposed to be a funny poem, but before it made me laugh it made me think... If you purchase so much of a product, eventually you'll tire of it. That is the key to happiness and maintenance is moderation.
I can't express enough how impeccable this piece is.