Comments : Acrostic, a second chance

  • 2 years ago

    by Cindy

    Michael
    Nice job on your Acrostic. Don't know why the subject seems familiar....lol
    Love the title you chose...and the words coming down are perfect.
    Take care Cindy

    • 2 years ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      I though I would write a poem rather that join in the debate. After all it has all been said before, she said! lol

  • 2 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    'DEJA VU SHE SAID'

    Clever poem Mr.Darcy, just managed to solve it before I sleepily climb into bed! lol!
    (I'm sure I've heard this poem before? lol!)
    A good write.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Another unique and imaginative write from you, Michael - you really do pull out all the stops with your poems, visually and imaginatively! A good idea too - stick to the poetry, as I am learning.
    All the very best,
    Ben

    Another unique and imaginative write....

    sorry

  • 2 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Hi Michael,

    Sad to say, but some people stay stuck in rewind in all regards and it is indeed best to look the other way, or make a good poem about it;)

    Well done,

    (((hugs)))

  • 2 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Destiny can change or we can change destiny!
    Interesting, imaginative and well penned!

  • 11 months ago

    by Kurt

    I really enjoyed this. Both boomerangs and trains travel away and return. A boomerang returns the same but the train's passengers may differ. It fits the theme with imagery and meaning. It's always wonderful to read the work of talented writers. Thank you!

  • 11 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Thanks Kurt. Did you like the acrostic?

  • 11 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Sir Michael,

    Deja vu, I experienced this many times. .. The people or the event that looks familiar or already happened. ..another Unique write sir. .. I like it. .
    5/5
    Gel

    • 11 months ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      Yeah, Gel got it!

      I love that term 'deja vu' it's so familiar, don't you think?

  • 11 months ago

    by Em

    De ja vu can sometimes be so very weird.
    Great acrostic, Michael.
    Em

  • 11 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    I think so.. and there's an opposite of deja vu it's called "Jamais vu".

    It's a French word meaning "never seen". It's the feeling or experience that a person knows or recongnizes a situation, but that it still seems very unfamiliar or unknown...
    so forgetfulness is called Jamais vu. .hahaha just kidding bout the forgetfulness thingy. ..

    • 11 months ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      Very knowledgeable, Gel. You have quiet suitably impressed me, my dear.

  • 11 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Lol sir Michael.... Did I?