Comments : Won't be long

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Wonderful, Chelsey - truly. I love the end:
    "I hope you're as anxious as me......to meet". Really strong end and a really strong poem.
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Chelsey I really like this.

    Time stands still for no man and here you are pondering time because you want to see this beautiful human that you have created in your mind. It's truly beautiful how you wrote this and the ending is penned wonderfully.

    Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Phil

    Bravo on a grand write.

  • 7 years ago

    by Abstract Poet

    I like this pome it was beautiful. :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    This thought remains in our heart until the one whom God has chosen for us doesn't come in out life.

    Loved it!

  • 3 years ago

    by Anthony

    Sounds like a mother eagerly awaiting a child to be conceived then born