Comments : Will you

  • 8 years ago

    by DK

    Hi all, I'm doing this for a friend's wedding. Appreciate it if you could give me your comments and perhaps how i could improve on it. Thanks, and hope you like it.

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael Latsky

    Why would they unravel lies, be that as it may was a nice read

    • 8 years ago

      by DK

      Hi Michael, I made some amendments to it. Thanks for the suggestion.