And you say my poems have been of a darker hue recently?!
"the magnitude of its force grabs my throat ripping my senses apart" - powerful stuff.
I love the repetition of "as I remember you" at the end of this piece - very effective.
All the best and I hope you are well,
Your poem expresses what many have felt after a lost love, emotions that cannot be subdued, an empty heart filled with pain. The memories you cling to bring back a flood of the good times but fade into the reality of a love lost. Great job, Nominated!
Meena took the readers by emotional storm with this heavy hearten write, teary eyed from start to finish.
The heart weighs heavy when missing the ones you love. Sorrow whispers throughout, leaving endless amounts of anguish and grief. This write hits the heart and soul of the reader. Lovely and elegant, emotional write by Meena!
Beautiful, the memories we own take us to the height and depth to experience emotion in raw unrepenting form. They direct our thought, command our attention, force us to deal with their presence. Just beautifully written.