Comments : Standing Water (haiku)

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Larry,

    This is an exquisite haiku, wonderfully executed. The sad imagery that fills the mind while reading this is extremely powerful - never easy in so few lines.
    Well written indeed and all the best
    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    A few lines saying a whole lot. That is not easy.
    A powerful piece.