Dec 6, like a volcano

by Everlasting   Dec 7, 2015


Someday, I'll be like a volcano
underneath the sea-
immersed in depth
awaiting to erupt with wisdom
And create an island
where people can step on and rest

Written by: L.L.

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  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    A life waiting to be sown upon earth, first a cleansing then spreading its future. Short yet it holds the meaning of what life is about..nice.

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Death is part of life and I like to believe that we all meet on this island one day. Beautiful.

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    I like this alot...

    Like nature, the Earth dies and rebirths; well, parts of it do. Reincarnation is something good and spiritual to believe in. Why are we born in this form? Do our actions, our hearts form our new molds?

    Your poem speaks to me of this, or at least a flavour that I can savour like memories around a camp fire. A Volcano holds the seed of birth and so new life. The fact you place yours under the sea is symbolic. Its like new life being born one fine day from the embryonic sea.

    I hope we meet as hummingbirds on your new island one day.

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 1 year ago

      by Everlasting

      I hope so too. I love hummingbirds. Thank you for your comment.

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