Sadness (Acrostic)

by - Mr. Darcy   Dec 13, 2015


Serengeti tears flow
Along a life
Depressed and in
Need of compassion;
Each pang of pain feels
So much better when
Soothed with sweet words.

michael
2015

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  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    A beautiful write. When sadness overcomes us and we feel all alone and forgotten there is always hope. Nothing will last forever. With each rain there comes sunshine.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Michael.

    As sad as this is, it is beautifully written and tinged with a lovely dose of hope towards the end. I love your use of alliteration in this and "Serengeti tears" is a wonderful way to draw the reader in.

    A wonderful write and all the best,
    Ben