Comments : A secret Love

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    The secret love affair for reasons all your own! A mistress? A friend's wife? An immense age gap? The sordid possibilities are endless! lol
    Great write Peter,
    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by PETER EDWARDS

      Yes, it was a friends wife. Yours! Lol!!
      Just joking!
      Wrote it a long time ago, watching a workmate go through this painful process!
      Thanks for your comments Ben.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I wondered where she was going...now it all makes terrible sense :(

    • 1 year ago

      by PETER EDWARDS

      No turkey for you this year chum.
      I'll be eating it!!
      Lol!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Could I at least come for pudding?

    • 1 year ago

      by PETER EDWARDS

      Well, you are a cuckold aren't you?,
      So yes!

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I knew I shouldn't have written that HYPERTHETCAL senryu! Damn it!

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    ...you are so right. Unless we make time, how can we take it?

    Thank you for taking the time to write this and for sharing it here for me and others to read.

    Take care,

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    You posted two at once, that is a first.
    For a moment I thought Mrs Edwards was having competition of kinds, but in the comments I saw it was about a third party.
    What to say about the content? Everything goes, or so it seems these days.

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Thank you for sharing. Enjoyed reading.

  • 1 year ago

    by Cindy

    Peter
    This is in the Love category yet it is so sad....to have a love that you have to hide and sneek to see brought tears to my eyes. The poem is very well crafted the rhyme and flow are spot on...Great job!
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Well written but this is sp sad that you have a love you can't show