Comments : Head Stone

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is intense. I often wonder myself the purpose of life and where did time go. There is no easy answer. You said it so well. Take care

  • 1 year ago

    by Cindy

    What a great piece. This really touched my heart and brought tears to my eyes.
    Take care Cindy

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello Michael,

    Great job here. The rhyme and alliteration are a real treat for the reader. The content though morbid has been beautifully executed by painting a picture that many of us can relate to.

    Well done on this win. Bravo!

    Take care

    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by debbylyn

    Congrats on the win! I love the dark melancholia of this verse! The rhyming is good without being forced, with vivid images of life and death, fate, and the swift passage of our time.

  • 1 year ago

    by yogi73

    This poem asks one to contemplate as we all know its truth from the first line: For all intended purpose
    my life is almost over

    well done

  • 1 year ago

    by Cindy

    Congratulations on your win!
    Take care
    Cindy