Bad Santa

by Darren   Dec 21, 2015


Crack flashing red pants
drunken kid despising oaf
goodwill lost in gin.

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  • 1 year ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    Your poem made me laugh Darren, but shouldn't it of been 'purple pants' and not red?! lol!

    Seriously, a short but true poem.
    I loved the line 'goodwill lost in gin.'
    These words so true come Christmas!

  • 1 year ago

    by Cindy

    This is so sad. What a memory for a child to have.
    Great job!
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A break from the "fallen angel" series today Darren so I could have a look at this great little senryu. It certainly raised a smile and brought to mind memories of a funny film of the same title staring Billy Bob Thornton.

    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hi Darren,

    This made me smile. I can imagine Santa the next day opening bleary eyes, seeing strewn ladies underwear and discarded bottles. Oh, and nursing the hangover from hell.

    A funny write.

    Take care,

    Michael