Comments : Dead dreams

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Noor,

    Another heart-breaking little piece with some wonderful imagery. I love the idea of innocence being compared to that of 'first snow'

    Well done and stay well,
    Ben

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello Noor,

    I hope you are well.

    A powerful poem here. They say love can over come all, but that is only if love was present in the first place.

    (((Hugs)))

    Take care,

    Michael