Comments : Black Christmas

  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is excellent and I shall nominate this later when I have some votes. Probably the best I've read from you yet.

    Well done on this and I hope you are well,
    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Shruti

      Really? Thank you!

  • 8 years ago

    by nancy

    Its really nice bt I wud surely want to no who was da person.

    • 8 years ago

      by Shruti

      Thanks.
      I'll let you know when I find out.
      Thanks again.
      :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Cindy

    Beautiful piece. I was hoping this would win. I really enjoyed reading your poem.
    Excellent job!
    Take care
    Cindy

    • 8 years ago

      by Shruti

      Thank you so much!
      :)

  • 8 years ago

    by zvikov

    This is a very nice Poem full of longing - I like

  • 8 years ago

    by Mortal Utopia

    Wow this is amazing! So beautifully written! I felt like each line flows so elegantly onto the next and presents all of the poem's emotions and ideas perfectly. Thanks for sharing! :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Shruti

      Thanks a lot.
      :)