Comments : Sticks and Stones

  • 8 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    I like the refrain. It cleverly steers the reader, helps them to understand the pain of words, especially lies.

    The simille of a cold heart 'coal surrounded by darkness' was effective.

    Another good poem.

    Well done and take care,

    Michael

    • 8 years ago

      by Rosamay

      Thank you, and take care as well (:

  • 8 years ago

    by Lilith DevilHart

    Sis you did amazing, and I really like it you took your time. Well I hope that you will write more sis.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Lilith,

    This is a real deep Poem. With a deep meaning behind it. Words can hurt and I for one know that first hand as they stay forever. Such a powerful, emotional write.

    Em