Comments : Where do broken hearts go, do you know?

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    "You weep as you board the train that takes you back to the farm where you plan to remain with your memories in your mind as a crimson stain."
    ^^^^

    One of the best lines I've read from you Ken - excellent stuff.

    Well done on another thought-provoking piece and all the best,
    Ben

  • 2 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks Ben!

  • 2 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    This is an excellent piece Ken. Add to my favorite
    All the best

  • 2 years ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks my friend Dag!

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    Ken,

    This is a wonderful and powerful piece. It flows well with the rhyming. The title drew me in and I wasn't disappointed.

    Em

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    Ken,

    This is a wonderful and powerful piece. It flows well with the rhyming. The title drew me in and I wasn't disappointed.

    Em

  • 1 year ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    Thanks all!