Hello,

I hope you are well.

I like the image suggested in the forthcoming Winter freeze. I like the alliteration in: lagoon, soon and moon. In a neat little piece like this its musical.

Nice.

Take care,

Michael

Hello Lucero,

What an image-filled and beautiful little piece this is. I love the way you have started with the word "and" - it leaves the reader no time to relax; we are just jumping straight into the story at its conclusion almost - the important bit.
All the very best,
Ben