Comments : A real neat show

  • 1 year ago

    by Darren

    And around once more......

    Funny how the simple life of others seems more appealing at times.
    From this I get the feeling that she realizes at the end that she is just part of the gypsy game. One wouldn't work without the other.

    I once openly moaned on facebook that we are the 'entertained' generation. Sitting watching TV at home or films at the cinemas, we have video games consoles and phone apps, all to keep us busy and controlled.

    I think I was in a bit of a daft mood that day.

    great poem by the way.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This really is a very good poem and I am glad to see it nominated. I myself am out of votes!
    All the very best,
    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Karla

    Perfect.

  • 1 year ago

    by Karla

    Perfect.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Melissa,

    Lovely to see this on the front page this week. Congratulations and all the best,
    ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Darren

    Congrats on the win. Glad I nominated.

    this deserved to win.

  • 1 year ago

    by zvikov

    This is a nice one - I like.

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging comment

    There is such a large variety of wording that is so fun and detailed that I had to highlight this piece.

    The structure within the formatting also allows the reader to have fun reading this piece.

    I felt like I was at a carnival and I do believe that was meant to be the metaphor and the message within the lines is very powerful..

    Melissa has a true gift for pouring out her feelings within descriptive detail and metaphors!! Just wonderful